{"id":1044,"date":"2010-09-22T12:15:08","date_gmt":"2010-09-22T12:15:08","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.benjeapes.com\/?p=1044"},"modified":"2022-08-26T08:32:10","modified_gmt":"2022-08-26T08:32:10","slug":"game-plan","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.benjeapes.com\/index.php\/2010\/09\/game-plan\/","title":{"rendered":"Game plan"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Pay attention because I&#8217;m going to talk about writing, which I don&#8217;t often do. At least, not my current writing. Not my actual work in progress stuff.<\/p>\n<p>It weighs on me more with every passing year that there hasn&#8217;t been a genuine original Ben Jeapes novel published since 2004. And guess what &#8211; following yesterday&#8217;s meeting with my publisher this doesn&#8217;t look immediately set to change. But there is a renewed sense of purpose in the air, which makes a pleasant change.<\/p>\n<p>I haven&#8217;t exactly been twiddling my thumbs in the meantime: 3 Vampire Plagues, 2 Midnight Library collections and 3 $INSECT_EATING_TV_GUY ghostwriting gigs bear testimony to this.\u00a0<em>Time&#8217;s Chariot<\/em>\u00a0was also reissued in 2008, which was nice.<\/p>\n<p>Part of the problem is precisely all that hackwork, which pays bills nicely but gets in the way. I&#8217;m happy to be in a position now where I can turn down such offers without regret, unless they pay\u00a0really\u00a0well (like $INSECT_EATING_TV_GUY did).<\/p>\n<p>Part of the problem was that when I put the last full stop at the end of\u00a0<em>New World Order<\/em>\u00a0that was the end of the stories that had been burning inside me for years. Thereafter I had to start writing new stuff from scratch rather than just giving voice to pre-existing collections of thoughts. Ideas I can come up with until the cows come home, but plots &#8230; plots! Don&#8217;t talk to me about plots! Sticking needles in my eyes would be preferable to cudgelling my brains to work out what the \u00a3$%&amp; happens next.<\/p>\n<p>So with\u00a0<em>New World Order<\/em>\u00a0out of the way I started on a work which we will call for convenience Untitled Space Opera, or USO. The set-up for USO had been bubbling away for a while but it soon appeared that a satisfactory plot wasn&#8217;t going to develop, and anyway I had other distractions like getting married and what with one thing and another USO did get finished, after a fashion, but was never really fit for release into the wild. And anyway, in the meantime I had rather gone off space opera so my heart wasn&#8217;t in it. My heart was in a complete change of direction: taking an old short story of mine, &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.benjeapes.com\/grey.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The Grey People<\/a>&#8220;, and stretching it and expanding it backwards and forwards and generally developing in into a novel &#8211; a present day urban fantasy set in Salisbury with a present day slightly geeky teenage hero. Called\u00a0<a href=\"http:\/\/benjeapes.blogspot.com\/2006\/12\/ted.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Ted<\/a>, so call this book Ted1. Even then the plot fairy wasn&#8217;t entirely beneficent and it did a lot of bouncing back and forth between me and the publisher, who correctly identified a lot of what wasn&#8217;t working and which lead to a lot of rewriting.<\/p>\n<p>(I mean,\u00a0a lot.\u00a0Imagine if Rowling&#8217;s publishers had said &#8220;Well, we like Harry Potter &amp; the Philosopher&#8217;s Stone but the Philosopher&#8217;s Stone bit doesn&#8217;t really work &#8211; can you fix it?&#8221; That&#8217;s the kind of lot I mean. Eventually I had to write up a list of scenes, essentially delete anything with $NON_WORKING_ELEMENT and fill in the gaps with added Plot to make it work better. Which it did.)<\/p>\n<p>It was meant to be standalone but a sequel did suggest itself within the last pages, so while Ted1 moldered with the publisher and in between the hackwork I started on Ted2, which is now almost finished. And guess what, it was meant to be standalone but a sequel is suggesting itself so there could well be a Ted3 and I&#8217;ll have committed trilogy for the first time. But trilogies are good. Trilogies are sellable. I also want to do another alternate history fantasy which we will call N, possibly because that actually is what I might call it anyway.<\/p>\n<p>Cut a long story short, fast forward to yesterday &#8230;<\/p>\n<p>He likes Ted1. A lot. He also thinks it&#8217;s such a departure from my current track record with Random House that he\u00a0could\u00a0buy it but RH wouldn&#8217;t really be able to do it justice. In a couple of years he might (for currently undisclosable, but good, reasons) be in a position to do better, but not now.<\/p>\n<p>BUT over the last few years USO has also been bubbling at the back of my mind, and it&#8217;s had a couple of very useful critiques from friends. I now think it&#8217;s fixable, and what&#8217;s more we both agree it&#8217;s more in line with my other titles.<\/p>\n<p>So, I have a game plan! This is exciting and makes me feel all grown-up.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Finish Ted2<\/li>\n<li>Rework USO<\/li>\n<li>Sit on Ted1 pro tem<\/li>\n<li>Write N and\/or Ted3<\/li>\n<li>USO gets published<\/li>\n<li>Teds 1, 2 and possibly 3 are published in short order<\/li>\n<li>N gets published<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>This all assumes 1 publisher &#8211; it would get more complicated if another publisher were to show an interest in a Ted trilogy, which can&#8217;t be ruled out if my agent cogitates in that direction. You could probably draw a flowchart but for the time being I&#8217;ll keep it in my head.<\/p>\n<p>So, there we are and here I am. Onwards!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Pay attention because I&#8217;m going to talk about writing, which I don&#8217;t often do. At least, not my current writing. 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